Monday, January 11, 2016

Please Become My friends....

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Lonely Grows
As dark colored flowers
Because
She went
Without knowing
Now I must write poetry
Therefore,
Rain and wind
Please Become My friends



written by nuwan

7 comments:

  1. Your poetry comes out as sn entreaty from within. Very well done in so few words. Remarkable.

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    1. thank you very much my dear
      hope you come again
      good luck!

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    1. thank you so much
      hope you come again
      good luck!

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  3. Hmmmm, I don't see anything about food (the topic of this week's Midweek Motif) in your poem. Did you post this one here by mistake?

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    1. Sorry about this comment here. It should have been on your later poem which doesn't have to do with food either though. Anyway, be sure to link a specific poem...rather than just your blog...when you post. If you just link your blog, a reader doesn't know which poem you mean them to read. Peace.

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    2. Thank you for advice
      i'll do correct next time
      good luck mary!

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