Sunday, January 24, 2016

My dear wild flower

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My dear wild flower
School uniform is
Not suitable time
For  love...

Before love
You have to see
Much of things
On this world
Don't fall down
Nearby knowledge lamp
My dear tender

When you won the world's
Don't Hide your heart
Tell me
Looked eyes directly
My bless with you



by - nuwan
photo credit - www.imagefully.com

12 comments:

  1. brudbergJanuary 25, 2016 at 12:25 AM

    I think all good thing in life has it's time to blossom. But maybe love can be a light to guide.

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    1. Nuwan SJanuary 25, 2016 at 12:38 AM

      you're right bru.. but third countries girls are destroy there education because there school love....
      thank you buddy!

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    2. UnknownJanuary 25, 2016 at 3:16 PM

      I agree with Brudberg.

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    3. Nuwan SJanuary 25, 2016 at 8:54 PM

      me too agree with brudberg
      but my country some girl between 14 - 16 age destroyed they education because they school love.. they fathers cry i see my own eyes... i try to say it.. but im not tell every school love is wrong...

      thank you melinda

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  2. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)January 25, 2016 at 2:42 AM

    it's not just third world countries. i agree with brudberg's wise words...love can be a light to guide. the key words 'can' and 'guide'

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    1. Nuwan SJanuary 25, 2016 at 3:45 AM

      me be you have don't no.. there lot of girls here in poor world country school love destroy them learning life.. become mom in small age.. i'm not tell every love it happen.. but some more happen it...
      thank you marco...

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  3. MaryJanuary 25, 2016 at 5:28 AM

    I agree with the message of your poem! Truly young girls need to finish school. There is plenty of time for love in the future. There is much to see before the time of marriage and having children. Thanks for sharing this, Nuwan!

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    1. Nuwan SJanuary 25, 2016 at 7:21 AM

      absolutely mary that is i try to say...
      thank you so much!

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  4. Jae RoseJanuary 25, 2016 at 5:53 AM

    Yes there is time enough - although it is good to explore our feelings in a safe way too

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 25, 2016 at 10:32 AM

    Your message is so wise and loving....I love "My dear wild flower"....yes, they need to learn so much before the intricacies of love. Too many are in too big a hurry and that way lies heartbreak.

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