Isolated
mountain
Increase
My
grief
Isolated
mountain
Reminded
me
My
Lover...
Wind
left
you alone
he
left
me alone
now
you're grief
like
me...
Mist
cheated
You
he
cheated
me
now
you're alone
like
me...
Isolated
mountain
Increase
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The landscape reveals our emotions, mirrors them, lets us see how it is inside of we. Thank you!
ReplyDeletehi susan
Deletethank you very much!
Exquisite poem :)
ReplyDeletethank you dear sanaaa!
DeleteI resonate with the inner loneliness being reflected in the mountain. A wonderful response to the prompt.
ReplyDeletemy pleasure sherry!
Deletebeautifully written...
ReplyDeletethanks of lot sumana
DeleteHeart wrenching lines. Beautiful.
ReplyDeletehi dear
Deletethank you so much!
Sometimes it does seem like there is a mountain of grief one must overcome!
ReplyDeletethank you dear mary!
DeleteHopefully looking at the mountain will put your own torment into perspective and come through the present grief. I do hope so.
ReplyDeletethank you very much old egg!
DeleteHeart fullness at its peak, Nuwan. _m
ReplyDeletethank you dear magyar
DeleteIsolated mountain/ increase/ my grief. I thought of myself as the isolated mountain to which it makes my grief increase. totally relatable your poem is! thanks.
ReplyDeletethank you so much james!
DeleteThe transference of your pain has eased your pain in your esoteric bonding with the mountain. Nice write
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
thanks of lot gillena
DeleteThe feeling of isolation really is painful..and you have expressed it so early here - well done
ReplyDeletemy pleasure dear rose
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