Thursday, February 4, 2016

Identity Is Love

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Streaming River is attractive
Identity of that river
Is cold..

Blooming flower is pleasant
Identity of that flower
Is fresh...

Rising moon is bewitching
Identity of that moon
Is mild..    

Lovely mother is Great
Identity of That mother
Is Love.. 

- nuwan- 
this is written for poets united
photo credit - clik

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5 comments:

  1. HannahFebruary 4, 2016 at 11:07 AM

    The title and cyclic ending causes much power...I like your approach of journeying into the identity of different aspects in nature.

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  2. MaryFebruary 4, 2016 at 2:48 PM

    Beautiful. I think a mother can really impart in a young person a sense of identity. I enjoyed your other comparisons as well.

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  3. Sumana RoyFebruary 4, 2016 at 8:57 PM

    you've wonderfully captivated the essence of river, flower, moon and mother hood...

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  4. UnknownFebruary 8, 2016 at 7:52 AM

    Lovely the way this poem flows like the river with many sources of identity and value.

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  5. UnknownFebruary 23, 2016 at 10:34 PM

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