Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Isolated mountain



Isolated mountain
Increase
My grief
Isolated mountain
Reminded me
My Lover...

Wind
left you alone
he
left me alone
now you're grief
like me...

Mist
cheated You
he
cheated me
now you're alone
like me...

Isolated mountain
Increase
My grief


Posted for Susan’s Midweek Motif ~ Mountain @ Poets United




by  -nuwan-

photo credit go to - goodfon.su


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22 comments:

  1. The landscape reveals our emotions, mirrors them, lets us see how it is inside of we. Thank you!

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  2. I resonate with the inner loneliness being reflected in the mountain. A wonderful response to the prompt.

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  3. Sometimes it does seem like there is a mountain of grief one must overcome!

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  4. Hopefully looking at the mountain will put your own torment into perspective and come through the present grief. I do hope so.

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  5. Heart fullness at its peak, Nuwan. _m

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  6. Isolated mountain/ increase/ my grief. I thought of myself as the isolated mountain to which it makes my grief increase. totally relatable your poem is! thanks.

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  7. The transference of your pain has eased your pain in your esoteric bonding with the mountain. Nice write

    Much love...

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  8. The feeling of isolation really is painful..and you have expressed it so early here - well done

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